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New Doppella OC

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I was thinking yesterday, just trying to come up with some good ideas for ocs and drawings and such, and this was one of my personal favorite ideas of the day.
Their names are Spark Show and Show Stopper.

So...
They are a Doppella stallion, as you can see. One with a red gem, one with white. Now, they began their lives as a fairly normal Doppella. Spark Show, the one with the green mane, enjoyed performing spectacular light tricks for the other colts and fillies in their home, earning him quite a bit of popularity. Meanwhile, his brother Show Stopper (other head, blue mane) just couldn't figure out what to do with his powers, at least, not anything that would get him noticed much. So, he, being attached to his brother, simply had to watch as the others gave awe-struck "ooh"s and "aah"s at the tricks of light and clamored around Spark Show, but no words for Show Stopper- it was as if he didn't exist, as if his brother were one of the single-headed ponies from above ground. And even when somepony did speak to him, it was usually a rather discouraging comment of "What can you do? Anything neat like your brother?", or "You're so lucky to be attached to Sparks, he's so cool!", or, after he spoke up when somepony greeted his brother, "Uh... Hi...? Er, who are you again?", or something of the sort. Spark Show, however, never seemed to let it get to his head- the jolly green-maned colt acted as a sort of big brother figure, as nice as he could be to his neglected brother... But this bothered the bitter blue-maned colt as well, disliking being treated as if he was younger and in need of pity. But, finally, perhaps a solution! One day, while experimenting with his magic's abilities, a bit of a misfire struck a nearby squirrel. Its eyes dullened and it stared blankly at him, as if waiting for something. Show Stopper cocked his head at the creature, confused as to what he had done to it, and to his surprise, it copied his movements. He pondered this for a moment, a grin slowly creeping across his face. He looked at the squirrel and thought of a few commands. Look right, jump, wave, come here. The squirrel mechanically followed each command. Show Stopper, still pondering this power of his, glanced over at Spark Show, who had fallen asleep. His grin grew wider as a plan began to form in his mind, a seemingly foolproof plan to solve all of his problems. Come school the next day, there would be a new popular colt. So, the next day, Show Stopper set it into motion. As usual, his brother attracted a small crowd of his "fans", asking him if he had any new tricks or asking for a specific one to be repeated. Show Stopper scowled disdainfully, and, before Spark Show could respond to the colts and fillies, he cut in.
"Oh, you don't want to see my brother's silly tricks again, do you? I have something new, something better." he scoffed proudly.
He had their attention, although they seemed a bit doubtful. Spark Show gave him a stunned and mildly confused look, but said nothing as Show Stopper began to use his magic, his red gem emitting a glow. He turned to Spark Show, gem still glowing... To everypony's shock, he sent a wave of red-colored magic at his brother. The green-maned colt froze, eyes blank. Show Stopper, meanwhile, marveled blissfully in the sensation of power he felt as he gained control of the whole body. He then, not glancing at the colts' and fillies' reactions yet, began to belt out a few simple commands, which his brother followed. It was now the proud colt turned to see the crowd's reaction to his feat; but he was dismayed by what expressions met him. They were all backing away, terror and confusion on their faces. It wasn't natural for a Doppella to have control of his or her brother or sister. It wasn't right, it was unheard of, a terrible act. Show Stopper stared at them all, disappointed and enraged.
Having no words, he ran; awkwardly at first, being unused to controlling all of the body's legs, but he got the hang of it. He left the cavern and blinked coldly in the outside sunlight. A devilish grin curled at the corners of his mouth as he thought, though- he was free! He had complete control, he would no longer be overshadowed by his brother! Show Stopper felt that power suited him. As he grew, he integrated himself into the culture of the single-headed ponies of the overworld, taking control of Spark Show's magic to refract light around himself in such a way that nopony could see his second head, or his extra set of legs, or the gem on his forehead- they simply saw him as a dashing white unicorn stallion. He quickly ascended the ranks of society, using his strange power to assist in much of that endeavor. He now lives in a sizable mansion, hosting lavish parties and enjoying his absolute power. He gets what he wants- those who oppose him, or so much as make a wrong move in his eyes, often have a spell cast on them. But, now the spells vary, as Show Stopper studied magic and learned a few more choice spells, having a taste for mostly rare and difficult ones. He has turned ponies into statues (mainly maids who don't stay on his good side), and used his first power on many more, and used plenty of other spells on occasion. However, his powers did come at a cost to him- he is plagued by constant sounds of rhythmic hoofsteps around him, even when he is completely alone, as if the wandering consciousness of those he put under his spells are following him, as if they're in his head. This has made him a bit mad, and quite anxious, although he would never let anypony know that. That would be weak of him. And he believes cannot have weakness, for he is master of all he wishes to rule, the face of power. And nopony will stop him. Why should they? All they see is a dapper young stallion with huge popularity. They don't see his mindless brother, simply a hollow shell of a stallion, a bit of drool dripping down his chin. They don't see the fiery red gem that his magic flows from. They have not noticed, and who knows if they ever will?

Sorry about length... But, there it is, my new villian oc's story! =p What do you think? If there's something wrong, CONSTRUCTIVE criticism is appreciated, but comments outright insulting me and/or this oc will be ignored. I also appreciate comments/compliments on how they look, how I did on their story, etc~ Thank you! :D
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Frozen-Dead-Soul's avatar
am i allowed to youse doppellas in breeds?